Your model is very well made and the elements are carefully designed, especially the screen wall. I appreciate the number of study models you did and their relationship shows a clear intention from the start. However it also makes me wonder if more varied formal exploration at the beginning of the project might have served to help you develop your design's relationship to the poem. I would also encourage more careful and controlled photographs of the models and drawings - it deserves better representation.
Your model is very well made and the elements are carefully designed, especially the screen wall. I appreciate the number of study models you did and their relationship shows a clear intention from the start. However it also makes me wonder if more varied formal exploration at the beginning of the project might have served to help you develop your design's relationship to the poem.
ReplyDeleteI would also encourage more careful and controlled photographs of the models and drawings - it deserves better representation.